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Buddhist-Accountant Posted 18 years ago
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Today,I have accompanied my sister to go to one of Accounting firms in Indonesia.I wake up at 06.30 am and when opened my eyes, My sister was ready to go.
I walked to the Bus station and had waited for 10 minutes until the Bus came.
After we had arrived at Accounting firm in Sudirman Street in Aryo Bima's building, I went to my home with the same bus which i had taked in the morning.
  

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Hi, Today I accompanied my sister to one of the accounting firms in Indonesia. 30 am and, when I opened my eyes, my sister was ready to go. We walked to the bus station and waited for 10 minutes until the bus came.

  • Hi, Today I accompanied my sister to one of the accounting firms in Indonesia.
  • 30 am and, when I opened my eyes, my sister was ready to go.
  • We walked to the bus station and waited for 10 minutes until the bus came.
  • After we arrived at the accounting firm in Sudirman Street, in the Aryo Bima building, I went home on the same bus which I had taken earlier in the morning.
  • Do you have any questions about this now?
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Hi,
Today I accompanied my sister to one of the accounting firms in Indonesia. I woke up at 06.30 am and, when I opened my eyes, my sister was ready to go.
We walked to the bus station and waited for 10 minutes until the bus came. After we arrived at the accounting firm in Sudirman Street, in the Aryo Bima building, I went home on the same bus which I had taken earlier in the morning.
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Today I accompanied( why should i use "accompanied" not " Have accompanied"?) my sister to one of the accounting firms in Indonesia. I woke up at 06.30 am and, when I opened my eyes, my sister was ready to go.
We walked to the bus station and waited( Why should i use "waited"?) for 10 minutes until the bus came. After we arrived
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Hi,

Today I accompanied( why should i use "accompanied" not " Have accompanied"?) my sister to one of the accounting firms in Indonesia. I woke up at 06.30 am and, when I opened my eyes, my sister was ready to go.
We walked to the bus station and waited( Why should i use "waited"?) for 10 minutes until the bus came. After we arrived ( Why should i use "arrived" not "had arrived? When

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