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00Greetings! 02br
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00I'm wondering if my autobiography could be grammatically double-checked before 02br
00submitted to the job interviewers. 02br
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00I'm immensely grateful if you can help. Thank you. 01h2

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001. Professional Language Abilities 02br
00It's my great honor to introduce myself here. At first, I attend *** University and 02br
00going to graduate from college on June of this year. In this April, I had participated 02br
00in TOEIC simulated examination in college and gained the 845 points to pass the 02br
00graduation threshold of 730 points. However, I continually improve my English ability 02br
00and truly believe that excellent foreign language is the foundation of rapidly absorbing 02br
00other professional knowledge. Furthermore, I also took one-year Japanese course 02br
00to develop other foreign languages and even planned a backpack travel in Tokyo for 02br
00five days in order to practice conversation and experience local culture. ? 02br
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002. Active Learning Attitude 02br
00During the university, I joined the International Association for Student in Economics 02br
00and Management (AIESEC) to expand my international perspectives. This organization 02br
00is devoted to cultivating talented individuals and promoting international exchange. 02br
00In 2003, I was selected to present Taiwan to receive International students who come 02br
00from Australia, New Zealand, Denmark and Holland. In 2004, I applied American 02br
00internship program for three months to learn the working experience of other country. 02br
00After class, I often audit other commercial courses related to management, finance as 02br
00well as marking. I also subscribe CAREER and CHEER magazine to renew business 02br
00knowledge. ? 02br
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003. Good Social Contact and Management 02br
00I have been served as the director of the guitar corporation activity to assist nearly 02br
0050 newcomers to familiar with the orientation. The position promoted not only 02br
00communication skills but the ability of management as well. I deeply realize the 02br
00importance of teamwork to an efficient organization. Besides, I have been worked 02br
00in Starbucks and was select outstanding employees. I love to serve people and 02br
00was good at interacting with customers. ? 02br
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004. Great Ambition and Goals 02br
00I do believe that the above education background and work experience will be of 02br
00great assistance to me in applying MAERSK ' MISE program. I believe that I will be 02br
00able to employ my linguistic language plus my efficient learning and strong ambition 02br
00to complete the program smoothly and become an outstanding employee. 02br
00In the future, I am eager to devote myself to the MAERSK company and create 02br
00great contributions. 02br
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00Dear executives: I am applying with a sincere and determined heart. I look very forward 02br
00to attending your program and to transferring to overseas companies. Finally, I would like 02br
00to thank you for reviewing my resume and thanks for your time. 02br
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00P.S. I would love to work by the day of July 1. 02br
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00Sincerely yours, 0-