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SHINING HAIR

Good hair gives a good look. Shining thick hair is almost preferred and liked by all Usually the hair that falls are replaced but at times, the hair fall is more than that of the replacement that leads to baldness. To avoid baldness and maintain good healthy hair little attention is needed. Hair fall occurs due to many reasons. The foremost being improper care. Imbalance in harmone levels is also an important reason for hair fall. Tension and intake of certain medicines also lead to hair loss. Proper diagonosis helps in selecting the correct remedy in controlling hair fall.

HAIR CARE

Hair should be washed at regular intervals using mild shampoos, preferably home made ones. Applying good and natural Conditioners helps in keeping the hair healthy .Using shampoos daily is not good for hair. Applying packs and massaging the scalp once, in a week, promotes hair growth. Aloe vera is good for hair. Apply Aloe vera juice in the scalp, leave it for 15 minutes and then rinse thoroughly. It helps to keep your scalp moist and your hair silky. Egg is also a good conditioner. Beat yolk of the egg thoroughly, add two spoons of baby oil beat again add water and apply to your hair. Massage well in your scalp. Let it stay for a few minutes and then rinse well. Olive oil is also good for hair, and can be used to massage hair. The pack chosen must suit your climatic and economic conditions.

A healthy scalp gives healthy hair, hence scalp should be kept free from dandruff, and other fungal attacks. Brushing hair twice daily increases blood circulation in the scalp and helps hair growth. If you go swimming in chlorinated water, it is better to use a hair cap, if not possible, wet your hair thoroughly and use a conditioner, and then swim. The conditioner protects your hair from the chlorine content .Good diet is also equally important. Foods rich in fiber content vitamin B5 and folic acid are good for hair growth. Drinking water to the needed level helps to keep the hair soft, and prevents dry hair.

HAIR STYLES

Choosing a hair style that suits you is very important. Whatever be the style you choose, be sure to free your hair and let it loose at night. Use hair bands and other things that does not break your hair. Good and high quality hair sprays are to be choosed. Now a days hair coloring is an important aspect in hair style. It is good to use natural hair colors. Hair colors easily damage the hair folicules and some with lead content causes serious damage to health. To avoid grey hair and to control it, it is better to use natural products like henna. Curd mixed with black pepper is a good remedy. Mix two spoons of black pepper powder with a cup of curd and apply on the hair. Leave it for half an hour and rinse well. Curd makes the hair soft and stimulates hair growth, while pepper changes the hair color.

The use of natural products is always good, when impossible it is better to use high quality branded products for health care.