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Nhatminh12369 Posted 15 years ago
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Please check mistake for me (2)
I'm learning writting english and I have written few more sentenses. Can everyone check mistake for me, please. Thanks you 
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1. I and my family intend to stay at ABC hotel when we are in Da Lat because it is very large, accomodation and near Da Lat's market.
2. In the morning, we will visit some famous tourist spots in Da Lat, such as Tinh Yeu valley, Cam Ly falls, and garden city.
3. I want to go to Thai Lan because I want to discover their culture, enjoy their food and go shopping.
4. We will fly to United State by Viet Nam Airlines. It is the biggest and most famous airlines in VietNam.
5. I need to bring sweater and neckpieces in this vacation because I intend to go to Canada. There is very chilly.
6. Because there is very sunny, I need to bring sun cream, glasses and umbrella.
.1. I and my family intend to stay at ABC hotel when we are in Da Lat because it is very large, accomodation and near Da Lat's market.
2. In the morning, we will visit some famous tourist spots in Da Lat, such as Tinh Yeu valley, Cam Ly falls, and garden city.
3. I want to go to Thai Lan because I want to discover their culture, enjoy their food and go shopping.
4. We will fly to United State by Viet Nam Airlines. It is the biggest and most famous airlines in VietNam.
5. I need to bring sweater and neckpieces in this vacation because I intend to go to Canada. There is very chilly.
6. Because there is very sunny, I need to bring sun cream, glasses and umbrella.
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I have underlined some problem areas: 1. I and my family intend to stay at ABC hotel when we are in Da Lat because it is very large, accomodation and near Da Lat's market. 2.
- I have underlined some problem areas: 1.
- I and my family intend to stay at ABC hotel when we are in Da Lat because it is very large, accomodation and near Da Lat's market.
- 2.
- In the morning, we will visit some famous tourist spots in Da Lat, such as Tinh Yeu valley , Cam Ly falls , and garden city .
- 3.
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I have underlined some problem areas:
1. I and my family intend to stay at ABC hotel when we are in Da Lat because it is very large, accomodation and near Da Lat's market.
2. In the morning, we will visit some famous tourist spots in Da Lat, such as Tinh Yeu valley, Cam Ly falls, and garden city.
3. I want to
1. I and my family intend to stay at ABC hotel when we are in Da Lat because it is very large, accomodation and near Da Lat's market.
2. In the morning, we will visit some famous tourist spots in Da Lat, such as Tinh Yeu valley, Cam Ly falls, and garden city.
3. I want to
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Thanks for your help.
I have fixed some problem and some points I don't know how to fix it (red color).
1. I and my family intend to stay at ABC hotel when we are in Da Lat because it is very large, accomodation and near Da Lat's market.
2. In the morning, we will visit some fa
I have fixed some problem and some points I don't know how to fix it (red color).
1. I and my family intend to stay at ABC hotel when we are in Da Lat because it is very large, accomodation and near Da Lat's market.
2. In the morning, we will visit some fa
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1. I and my family intend to stay at ABC Hotel when we are in Da Lat because it is a very large accommodation and near Da Lat's market.
2. In the morning, we will visit some famous tourist spots in Da Lat, such as Tinh Yeu Valley, Cam Ly Waterfall, and Garden City.
3. I want to go to Thai Lan because I want to learn about their culture, enjoy their
2. In the morning, we will visit some famous tourist spots in Da Lat, such as Tinh Yeu Valley, Cam Ly Waterfall, and Garden City.
3. I want to go to Thai Lan because I want to learn about their culture, enjoy their
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