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Shaun07 Posted 17 years ago
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Hello All,



My name is Shaun Churm and I would like to take the opportunity to write to you as a Member of Unison, to introduce myself on my new appointment as the Youth Officer for the Central Site.



My role will cover all of the Central Site including Royal Hallamshire, Weston Park, Charles Clifford and Jessop’s Wing.



In 2007 I was a Health Apprentice in Medicine at the Royal Hallamshire, once I finished my training package in 2008 I accepted a job as a Health Care Assistant in Medicine on the ward where I was on clinical placement.
  

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Try: My name is Shaun Churm, and I would like to take this opportunity to write to you as a Member of Unison and to introduce myself as the new Youth Officer for the Central Site. My role will cover all areas in the Central Site including Royal Hallamshire, Weston Park, Charles Clifford, and Jessop’s Wing. In 2007, I was a Health Apprentice in Medicine at the Royal Hallamshire.

  • Try: My name is Shaun Churm, and I would like to take this opportunity to write to you as a Member of Unison and to introduce myself as the new Youth Officer for the Central Site.
  • My role will cover all areas in the Central Site including Royal Hallamshire, Weston Park, Charles Clifford, and Jessop’s Wing.
  • In 2007, I was a Health Apprentice in Medicine at the Royal Hallamshire.
  • Once I finished my training package in 2008, I accepted the job as a Health Care Assistant in Medicine on the ward where I did my clinical placement.
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Try:

My name is Shaun Churm, and I would like to take this opportunity to write to you as a Member of Unison and to introduce myself as the new Youth Officer for the Central Site.

My role will cover all areas in the Central Site including Royal Hallamshire, Weston Park, Charles Clifford, and Jessop’s Wing.

In 2007, I was a Health Apprentice in Medicine at the Royal H
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My role within Unison as the Youth Officer includes, recruiting youth members and supporting members under the age of twenty five when on clinical placement.



If you would like to get in touch with me feel free with the information given below.

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