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My name is Kristou Nebil, I am from Tunisia and I am studying engineering in Sfax.
I always had a passion for numbers, so once the bac in hand; I decided to turn towards Preparatory Institute for Engineering Studies of Tunis (IPEIT) MP chain.
These two years of quality education and a particularly high theoretical level, I have developed the organization, speed, persistence and allowed me to gain work discipline, rigor and methods that m ' were beneficial for the long term.
Then following the national contest and being fascinated by new technologies and embedded systems I am facing the ENIS to follow a course of electrical engineering.
The first year was composed mainly of two types of education; The first is related to electrical engineering (automation, electronics, electrical engineering, etc..), On the second type of education, it can be described as further education (mathematics, computer science, general economics, English, etc..).
In the second year I chose the electronic option as being the area that fascinates me the most.
My first internship was in the SOTUCHOC and specifically in the maintenance department and I followed the system of factory automation which allowed me to have a clear and general functioning and social atmosphere and professional industries.
2nd for my internship I had the chance to do an internship or a SAGEMCOM I participated in improving the performance of the wave soldering machine CMS line, by the way, with my buddy of course, of On the one hand we have established and set the playback system has a bar code and secondly we have studied and designed a digital PID temperature based PIC on behalf of the same machine.