‘Dear Mr. X’ is a salutation that is usually separated from the rest of the letter. As I discussed with you earlier over the phone, I ‘received’ (rather than ‘got’) an FTE offer and would like to ‘accept it’, since I’m planning to expand my family—and for a few other personal reasons.
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‘Dear Mr. X’ is a salutation that is usually separated from the rest of the letter.
As I discussed with you earlier over the phone, I ‘received’ (rather than ‘got’) an FTE offer and would like to ‘accept it’, since I’m planning to expand my family—and for a few other personal reasons.
The remaining sentences sound OK.