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Dear Dave



I am fine, thank you .How is your life in ? is very hot and raining heavily .I wish I could have a steak with you in now.



Last year, I had same problem as you. My parents rejected me to be a swimming trainer, due to they thought swimming could not been a profession that promises a good future and fixed salary. My parents wanted me to study management but I like swimming. I always dream of being a swimming trainer. At that time, I was upset and disappointed. After consideration of my parents, I decided to study management and swimming as my favorite hobby. I thought all parents want their children to have a good career, so they don’t have to worry about me. If I have more money, I would give more money to my parents and have better life.

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Would you like to study medicine? If you like to study medicine, you should work hard for it, due to this course is good for future and meet a lot of profession people. This course can lead you to have better prospect with better salary and it also help a lot of patients. To become a famous ballet dancer, it is rather difficult especially for man. Because males have not got as good shape as females and males can not dance as good as females. You can treat ballet as a hobby and play it once a week.



You should talk with your parents and try to tell your parents. You would play ballet once a week and study hard in medicine I believe your parents will not oppose your opinion. Please don’t be upset and try to find prefect solution.



I hope, my advice can help you to solve this problem.



Love



Pat