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Naomi drove the dagger into Usopp's chest, his puzzled expression was the last thing she saw as he plumeted into the sea. She turned around to face the deadliest pirate Gallagher,her captain."Good work'',was all he said.He then proceeded to join the celebration on her victory, she followed suit, leaving the deck of the ship. Earlier, naomi had latched herself onto another helpless crew. The captain didn't have a navigator to take them to there next destination safely. Naomi agreed to accompany them. The sail through the storm was troublesome but no matter how hard the water came crashing,Naomi wound divert from it swifly.when they reached safe waters ,the captain Luffy asked Naomi if she would become part of their crew. Naomi agreed leading to best time of her life. she never thought that there were people in this day and age, that thought only about having fun and didn't bother with tommorow until it came. They allowed her to take anything she wanted inculding their gold. She had stayed with them for two months and was part of them. Naomi felt right at home and although she had grown accustomed to them,she knew her departure was near. whilst, everyone slept naomi took the oppurtunity to make her get away, with one last look at ship she left. luffy was shocked by her abrupt depature.He read the note again incredulous to what it said.It stated that Naomi had taken the treasure, which they had already given her, and that they were not to follow her. luffy proceeded to tracking her down and found her standing on the deck of an omnious looking ship.The flag was well known it was none other than Gallagher ruler of the sea. she kept to herself, as she peered along the ocean,her well trained eye caught sight of luffy's ship.she had to warn them. Gallagher was not a person to be trifled with,or else they would pay with their life. Since it was dark she knew she wouln't be spotted leaving the ship as she crept past the captain's cabinet she heard someone shouting her name....dread filled her as she raced to where the sound came from ,to late. Naomi saw usopp, one of luffy's watchmen standing on deck surrounded by Gallagher's men."I'll finish him off",she said "Besides he came looking for me" the men laughed in agrreement. they stepped back naomi walked forward with her trusty dagger in hand she led usopp to the edge of the ship where she sliced her own wrist, making it appear liked she had stabbed him. she shoved him off the ship before he could say anything. she had saved his life. He dared not show his face or they would both be killed.The creew cheered her on and left to continue celebrating her return. she served Gallagher so that her family would remain alive.she stole trasures of the sea for him.there is always a second point of veiw in this case you would have to look beneath the surface.