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Bird Of Paradise Posted 18 years ago
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Please check the following experience certificate for any errors. Thanks.

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN

This is to certify that Mr. Masroor Sher Khan ID.# 6268 has worked in the capacity of Driver Heavy Equipment at Al Qussie Int. Cont. Est. w.e.f. 12-14-2005 to 10-01-2007.

During his stay in the company we found him extremely hardworking, cooperative and punctual. The company owes him for the meritorious services which he has rendered to it. In view of his proficiency and deep knowledge with ample experience in the mentioned field, he will always be a valuable asset for whichever company he joins.

we wish him every success in life.
  

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  • ") Do we need a "from" before the first date?
  • " In view if his experience, proficiency, and deep knowledge in the field of heavy equipment operation, - - - - - - - to whatever company he joins.
  • in life seems a little excessive.
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Heavy Equipment Driver (I don't understand "Cont.Est.w.e.f.") Do we need a "from" before the first date?

For the second sentence in the middle paragraph, how about: "The company is indebeted to him for his meritorious services."

In view if his experience, proficiency, and deep knowledge in the field of heavy equipment operation, - - - -

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