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Faust.ru Posted 15 years ago
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The sentence is:

"The identification accuracy is an important factor determining the performance of the control system integrally"

Is it written correct or not? If integrally is used properly - I'd like to tell that the quality of operation of the whole control system depends on the identification accuracy as it is the first stage of system design...
  

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Hello, faust - and welcome to English Forums. I think it is clearer to do it like this: Identification accuracy is the key factor in determining the performance of the whole control system.

  • Hello, faust - and welcome to English Forums.
  • I think it is clearer to do it like this: Identification accuracy is the key factor in determining the performance of the whole control system.
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Hello, faust - and welcome to English Forums. I think it is clearer to do it like this:

Identification accuracy is the key factor in determining the performance of the whole control system.

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