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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Please check if this sentence is written OK?
Hi teachers. Is this sentence written OK?
Don sits in a circle, having just listened to a guy sharing something with the rest of the group.
Therapist: Alright, who wants to be next?
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anonymous Don sits in a circle, having just listened to a guy sharing something with the rest of the group. We can figure out what you mean, but one person cannot sit in a circle. The men are sitting in a circle.
- anonymous Don sits in a circle, having just listened to a guy sharing something with the rest of the group.
- We can figure out what you mean, but one person cannot sit in a circle.
- The men are sitting in a circle.
- You have to say more, maybe "Don sits in a circle of men …".
- Also, the participial phrase just sort of hangs there unsupported.
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anonymousDon sits in a circle, having just listened to a guy sharing something with the rest of the group.
We can figure out what you mean, but one person cannot sit in a circle. The men are sitting in a circle. You have to say more, maybe "Don sits in a circle of men …". Also, the participial phrase just sort of hangs there unsupported. It sounds like you
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