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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Please check if this is correct?

I would like to use this phrase for my product. I have website for selling Christmas gifts.

"place where wishes come alive!"

Any comment?
  

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Anonymous I would like to use this phrase for my product . I have website for selling Christmas gifts. " Any comment?

— CalifJim

  • Anonymous I would like to use this phrase for my product .
  • I have website for selling Christmas gifts.
  • " Any comment?
  • My comment is this.
  • A product is not a place.
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AnonymousI would like to use this phrase for my product. I have website for selling Christmas gifts. "place where wishes come alive!"
Any comment?
My comment is this. A product is not a place. Why does your phrase say "place" when it's a phrase for a "product"?

CJ
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The word "place" refers to the website which can be meant as a place. It's acceptable to me.
I'd use a determiner also, for the word "website", for example an indefinite article. "a website".
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KhoshtipMan"place" refers to the website
OK. Now I get it. That makes sense.

I'd say The place where wishes come alive!

CJ
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