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Do you know about legend of mid autumn festival? I will tell you. On upon a time, there are ten suns on the sky. They scorched crow and make lots people died. Then a braver man appeared. His name is Yang Yi. He was extremely good at archery. He shot down nine suns and keep one sun to bring light and warmth. Thanks to amazing feat, veryone had a good living. They admired and honor him. The immortals noticed. She rewarded him a elixir of immortal. But he was merrried with Chang E. He loved her and did'nt far away her. So he take a elixir her to hided. On occasion Yi was away, his appentice boken into looking for elixir. Chang E drunk it and ascend into the moon. Yi turned home and did'nt find his wife. He went to everywhere finding her. On the night was bright, he looked at round moon and was amazied to see a figure like his wife. May me, Chang E's love drew her on the moon, where is nearest the earth. Upon understanding, Yi brought her favorite foods, fruits, cakes to shared with her.