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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

please check if its correct english and please help me to rephrase it

Buy Gold jewellery & get 1 gram of silver free on every gram of gold. Coins & Bullion not included.

(For eg Customers buying 10.5 grams of gold jewellery, he will get 10 grams of silver free.)




Buy Diamonds upto Rs 10,000 get 5% off on MRP

Buy Diamonds for Rs 10,001 to Rs 25,000 get 7% off on MRP

Buy Diamonds for Rs 25,001 to Rs 40,000 get 10% off on MRP

Buy Diamonds for Rs 40,001 & above get 15% off on MRP



Buy 2 Kookai Watches & get 1 free
  

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Do I get 10% for this editing work? Buy gold jewellery & get 1 gram of silver free for every gram of gold. Coins & bullion not included.

— Mister Micawber

  • Do I get 10% for this editing work?
  • Buy gold jewellery & get 1 gram of silver free for every gram of gold.
  • Coins & bullion not included.
  • 5 grams of gold jewellery will get 10 grams of silver free.
  • Buy diamonds up to Rs 10,000 and get 5% off MRP Buy diamonds for Rs 10,001 to Rs 25,000 and get 7% off MRP Buy diamonds for Rs 25,001 to Rs 40,000 and get 10% off MRP Buy diamonds for Rs 40,001 & up and get 15% off MRP Buy 2 Kookai watches & get 1 free
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Do I get 10% for this editing work?


Buy gold jewellery & get 1 gram of silver free for every gram of gold. Coins & bullion not included. For example, a customer buying 10.5 grams of gold jewellery will get 10 grams of silver free.

Buy diamonds up to Rs 10,000 and get 5% off MRP

Buy diamonds
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you can get sir I dn't mind

Kindly till me 'Get 5% off on MRP' sounds better than 'Get 5% off MRP'.

Thanks & Regards,
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Kindly till me 'Get 5% off on MRP' sounds better than 'Get 5% off MRP'. -- No: 'off on' is awkward and uncalled for. MRP is 'maximum retail price', right? You are offering 5% off the price.
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Thanks a lot sir and ya you are right that it is awkward to right in that way. Sir how if I right, Get 5% off the MRP, using article is right here. (MRP is Maximum Retail Price only)

Thnaks & Regards,
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You can use 'the', but it is not necessary, since your advertising copy is in 'telegraphic' or 'headline' style.
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Sir one last query generally in all ads i see Get 10% on MRP, that means they all use wrong english. Kindly let me know

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Hi,

Sir one last query generally in all ads i see Get 10% on MRP, that means they all use wrong english. Kindly let me know

As you probably know, MRP is Manufacturer's Retail Price. Get 10% off the MRP.

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