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Thien Tan Chuong Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Please, check grammar of my CV
Hello everyone,
I finished my CV to apply my job, but I am not confidence about my writing in CV so I hope that some one can check and fix my writing.
I finished my CV to apply my job, but I am not confidence about my writing in CV so I hope that some one can check and fix my writing.
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Hi, It would be a lot easier to make comments and edits if you pasted the text directly into your post. That's what people usually do. Can you?
- Hi, It would be a lot easier to make comments and edits if you pasted the text directly into your post.
- That's what people usually do.
- Can you?
- Are you applying for a job, or for some further education?
- You r objective does not make that clear to me.
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Hi,
It would be a lot easier to make comments and edits if you pasted the text directly into your post.
That's what people usually do. Can you?
Are you applying for a job, or for some further education? You r objective does not make that clear to me.
For a job, I would expect eg
My objective is to obtain a position as a web designer, in a company t
It would be a lot easier to make comments and edits if you pasted the text directly into your post.
That's what people usually do. Can you?
Are you applying for a job, or for some further education? You r objective does not make that clear to me.
For a job, I would expect eg
My objective is to obtain a position as a web designer, in a company t
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Thanks to your advice, I have edited a bit
678 A Lea Bridge Road, London E10 6AP. Hung Vu Pham
Date of Birth: 09/10/1985 Nationality: Vietnamese
Telephone Number: 07988744530 Mobile Number: 07988744530
Ema
678 A Lea Bridge Road, London E10 6AP. Hung Vu Pham
Date of Birth: 09/10/1985 Nationality: Vietnamese
Telephone Number: 07988744530 Mobile Number: 07988744530
Ema
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Hi,
Here are some edits and comments.
8 A Lea Bridge Road, London E10 6AP. Hung Vu Pham
Date of Birth: 09/10/1985 Nationality: Vietnamese
In my experience, age and nationality are not included
Telephone Number: 07988744530 Mobile Number: 07988744530
Email Address: (Email removed) My website: phamvuhung.co.uk
My Objective
Here are some edits and comments.
8 A Lea Bridge Road, London E10 6AP. Hung Vu Pham
Date of Birth: 09/10/1985 Nationality: Vietnamese
In my experience, age and nationality are not included
Telephone Number: 07988744530 Mobile Number: 07988744530
Email Address: (Email removed) My website: phamvuhung.co.uk
My Objective
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From your advise, I remove modules section, just keep some paragraph of single final project in order to show employee my work
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Hi,
To start a career in the Information Technology industry relating to my study, preferably in position of web developer where my creative initiative, ideas, coding skills and a genuine enthusiasm will allow me to progress.
I still feel you need to be more definite and precise. Don't expect
Objective |
To start a career in the Information Technology industry relating to my study, preferably in position of web developer where my creative initiative, ideas, coding skills and a genuine enthusiasm will allow me to progress.
I still feel you need to be more definite and precise. Don't expect
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