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Thien Tan Chuong Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Please, check grammar of my CV

Hello everyone,
I finished my CV to apply my job, but I am not confidence about my writing in CV so I hope that some one can check and fix my writing.

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Hi, It would be a lot easier to make comments and edits if you pasted the text directly into your post. That's what people usually do. Can you?

  • Hi, It would be a lot easier to make comments and edits if you pasted the text directly into your post.
  • That's what people usually do.
  • Can you?
  • Are you applying for a job, or for some further education?
  • You r objective does not make that clear to me.
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Hi,

It would be a lot easier to make comments and edits if you pasted the text directly into your post.

That's what people usually do. Can you?

Are you applying for a job, or for some further education? You r objective does not make that clear to me.

For a job, I would expect eg

My objective is to obtain a position as a web designer, in a company t
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Thanks to your advice, I have edited a bit

678 A Lea Bridge Road, London E10 6AP. Hung Vu Pham
Date of Birth: 09/10/1985 Nationality: Vietnamese
Telephone Number: 07988744530 Mobile Number: 07988744530
Ema
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Hi,

Here are some edits and comments.

8 A Lea Bridge Road, London E10 6AP. Hung Vu Pham

Date of Birth: 09/10/1985 Nationality: Vietnamese

In my experience, age and nationality are not included

Telephone Number: 07988744530 Mobile Number: 07988744530

Email Address: (Email removed) My website: phamvuhung.co.uk


My Objective
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From your advise, I remove modules section, just keep some paragraph of single final project in order to show employee my work


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Hi,

Objective



To start a career in the Information Technology industry relating to my study, preferably in position of web developer where my creative initiative, ideas, coding skills and a genuine enthusiasm will allow me to progress.

I still feel you need to be more definite and precise. Don't expect

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