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Fly350 Posted 15 years ago
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I asked the question Ivan Ivanov for my work:'Can you tell about TOP-5 situations in the past when you had the highest level of your passion to work?' He told me many things about his life. Can you answer this question too?
  

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Unfortunately, there is a bit of amibiguity as to what you, specifically, you want to say in this sentence, which makes correction uncertain. " He told me many things about his life. How would you answer this question?

  • Unfortunately, there is a bit of amibiguity as to what you, specifically, you want to say in this sentence, which makes correction uncertain.
  • " He told me many things about his life.
  • How would you answer this question?
  • Please note that I had to guess as to the context and precise meaning intended in the original, so I may have inadvertently changed the point of your original sentence.
  • Cheers, Robert
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Unfortunately, there is a bit of amibiguity as to what you, specifically, you want to say in this sentence, which makes correction uncertain. Here is one possibility:

I asked Ivan Ivanov this question about work: "Can you tell me about the top five times in the past when you have had the highest level of passion for your work?" He told me many things about his life. How would you answ
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Robert, Thank you muchly for your correction.

Cheers,

Fly350
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Robert, Thank you muchly for your correction.

Cheers,

Fly350

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