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The founder of the Puranik Builders Group, Mr. Gopal Puranik began his career as a young architect inspired by the buying realty has always been and will always remain a capital - intensive transaction. Both individuals and businesses view it as a long term investment. Long-term mortgages are the preferred route for buying realty. Two important factors emerge from this view - The necessity for a high quality of construction so that the asset benefits the customer by way of longevity and low maintenance.

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