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0 Why the stock markets across world are feeling the heat? 02 br
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00 A decade ago when Americans purchasing power was the highest, they went on the buying spree across the globe. At that point in time the economy was souring high and the ambition of Americans was skyrocketing. They indeed brought more than what they earned, it led to trade deficit. But foreign reserves of developing countries like India, China started overflowing which helped their GDP move upwards. Once Federal Government tighten the housing loan interest rates, American buying trend reversed and now the stock markets across the globe is feeling the heat. Recessiopn is hovering over the American market 0-
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00 A decade ago when Americans purchasing power was the highest, they went on the buying spree across the globe. At that point in time the economy was souring high and the ambition of Americans was skyrocketing. They indeed brought more than what they earned, it led to trade deficit. But foreign reserves of developing countries like India, China started overflowing which helped their GDP move upwards. Once Federal Government tighten the housing loan interest rates, American buying trend reversed and now the stock markets across the globe is feeling the heat. Recessiopn is hovering over the American market 0-
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0 Why are stock markets across world feeling the heat? Careful of word order in questions. I've highlighed other problem areas - grammar/punctuation/word choice blue and spelling red.
- 0 Why are stock markets across world feeling the heat?
- Careful of word order in questions.
- I've highlighed other problem areas - grammar/punctuation/word choice blue and spelling red.
- I think you are using Americans when you want 'America's'.
- 02 br 02 br 00 A decade 00 ago when 00 00 Americans 00 purchasing power was the highest, they went on 00 the 00 buying spree across the globe.
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0 Why are stock markets across world feeling the heat? Careful of word order in questions. I've highlighed other problem areas - grammar/punctuation/word choice blue and spelling red. I think you are using Americans when you want 'America's'. 02 br
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00 A decade 00 ago when 00 00 Americans 00 purchasing power was the highest, they went on 00 the 00 buying sp
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00 A decade 00 ago when 00 00 Americans 00 purchasing power was the highest, they went on 00 the 00 buying sp
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00 Please check the following I modified as per the feedback given 02 br
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00 A decade ago, when Americans' purchasing power was the highest, they went on a buying spree across the globe. At that point in time, The America's economy was going through the roof and the ambition of Americans was skyrocketing. Indeed they
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00 Please check the following I modified as per the feedback given 02 br
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00 A decade ago, when Americans' purchasing power was the highest, they went on a buying spree across the globe. At that point in time, The America's economy was going through the roof and the ambition of Americans was skyrocketing. Indeed they
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00 Factual errors: A person who buys more than he earns end up in debt, not with a trade deficit. The federal government does not set home loan rates, although the Federal Reserve (you may want to look more at them, but it is not really the same as saying the federal government) does set a rate that can affect home loan rates. I don't un
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0 00 Ms Grammar Geek I request you kindly ignore the factual errors and check my grammars. Indeed, I am also not very good at economics. But one thing I can confidently say that the foreign reserves do help in GDP growth of the country, although it's not the main driver, but one of the crucial components.One more thing I mean to refer Americans as individuals As you are from the 01 02
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0 Hi Creativeguru, 02 br
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00 I'm not a native and I hope to learn something from your post. 02 br
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00 To me, the following are a bit unnatural. They may not be grammatically incorrect but the natives may raise an eyebrow. 02 br
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01 i 00 A decade ago, when Americans purchasing power was the highest, (I would prefer to say America
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00 I'm not a native and I hope to learn something from your post. 02 br
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00 To me, the following are a bit unnatural. They may not be grammatically incorrect but the natives may raise an eyebrow. 02 br
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01 i 00 A decade ago, when Americans purchasing power was the highest, (I would prefer to say America
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0 Thanks New2grammar indeed whatever you said is a valid point and I am rewritten again 02 br
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00 A decade ago, when American purchasing power was the highest, they went on a buying spree across the globe. At that point of time, the America's economy was going through the roof and the ambition of Americans was skyrocketing. Indeed, they brought more than they earned, which l
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00 A decade ago, when American purchasing power was the highest, they went on a buying spree across the globe. At that point of time, the America's economy was going through the roof and the ambition of Americans was skyrocketing. Indeed, they brought more than they earned, which l
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0 A decade ago, when 01 b 00 America's 02 b 00 purchasing power was 01 b 00 at its 02 b 00 highest, 01 b 00 it 02 b 00 went on a buying spree across the globe. At that point 01 del 00 of time 02 del 00 , 01 del 00 the 02 del 00 America's economy was going through the roof and the ambition of Americans was
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0 Ok Grammar Geek from next time I will pick topic which I know well and thanks for your help 0-
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