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Flower1234 Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Mary seemed disappointed that I did not complete a lot of the tasks on the project. I admitted that I was slow and it took me a while to finish the completed tasks. I apologized for my slowness. I commented that she probably needed someone more experienced.
  

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"Mary seemed disappointed that I did not complete a lot of the tasks on the project. I admitted that I was slow and it took me a while to finish the completed tasks. I apologized for my slowness.

  • "Mary seemed disappointed that I did not complete a lot of the tasks on the project.
  • I admitted that I was slow and it took me a while to finish the completed tasks.
  • I apologized for my slowness.
  • " It sounds good to me.
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"Mary seemed disappointed that I did not complete a lot of the tasks on the project. I admitted that I was slow and it took me a while to finish the completed tasks. I apologized for my slowness. I commented that she probably needed someone more experienced."

It sounds good to me.
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I'd say "took me a while to finish the tasks". Emotion: smile

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