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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Attain an Associate in Arts Degree in Accounting at Miami-Dade Community College Miami, Florida; I am furthering my education at Florida International University, FIU, where I am a graduate and a member of the Dean’s List. Have a Bachelor’s of Business Administration Degree, Finance, earned in December 2009. Will sit to take the CPA exam and pursue an Accounting MBA Graduate Degree once complete the Certificate in Foundations of Accounting and Auditing (CFAA), which is a graduate program and will complete in the summer of 2011. In addition, presently pose a 3.8 GPA.
  

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Hi, Some of these statements are in truncated form. Some are in full sentence form. Why?

  • Hi, Some of these statements are in truncated form.
  • Some are in full sentence form.
  • Why?
  • You need a better format, as your present one is not easy to read and absorb.
  • For a start, have you considered putting each point on a separate line?
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Hi,

Some of these statements are in truncated form. Some are in full sentence form. Why?

You need a better format, as your present one is not easy to read and absorb. For a start, have you considered putting each point on a separate line?

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