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Topic: Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, flora and fauna in the world are being demolished by human activity. Some people think that they are unable to be changed this, while others have opinions that they can change current situation of environment. In my opinion, I completely agree that we can make environment better.

On the one hand, some people do not believe that they can alter damaged environment because of some reasons. Firstly, ecosystem is being damaged seriously, there are many extinct species such as Dodo bird, Caspi tiger so they think no one can change this because no way bring them back to life. Secondly, many countries do not have the sufficient finance to repair the environment. Therefore, the ability to repair the damage can be very difficult maybe even impossible. For example, natural resources take centuries to repair, and offsets need thousand years to become a forest.

On the other hand, someone has always believed that they can change the environment positively so they always try their best to alter bad things. First of all, they try to make the Earth greener because trees play an important role in human and species life. For instance, in my country there are many activities which are organized by environmentalists and even government in order to grow plants. Secondly, government and environmentalists raise awareness about protecting environment for citizens, especially students because they should be known about importance of saving environment and consequences if they do not protect environment. For example, in my country children were taught about necessities of environment and how to save it.

In conclusion, although changing environment after suffering negatively from human activities is extremely difficult, people also have opportunities to control, protect and preserve environment.