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TOPIC : Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. others argue that they should spend more money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is true that a highly debatable issue whether the government should not allocate resources for building theatres and sports stadium, while some people suppose that providing healthy care and education must be priority of government. I would argue that government should put medical care and education on top of priority government.

On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why put money on theatres and sports stadiums are unnecessary expense. One reason is that theater and stadium is too familiar to the locals. Like eating the same dishes every single day, they feel bored with visiting the same place. Furthermore, entrance tickets at some theatres and stadiums are expensive to afford. Cao Bang, for example, a province in south Viet Nam, it is rather hard for residents to make ends meet, let alone to spend money on visiting some entertainment places and stadiums there.

On the other hand, I believe that spending on medical care and education should be on top government priority. Firstly, more medicines are produced, more opportunities to save people who suffer healthy problems. If people are healthy, there will be more work productivity and the country will prosper as a whole. Secondly, school plays an important role to nurture essential skill for youngster. Teenagers can not only enlarge their knowledge but also develop their soft skills such as writing, speaking.

In conclusion, government should unnecessary expenses on building theatres and sport stadiums, it seem to me that government should allocate resources for education and healthy care is much better.

  

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You still make a lot of mistakes with singular/plural nouns and articles (a, an, the). Pay attention to studying this point of English grammar. TOPIC : Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums.

  • You still make a lot of mistakes with singular/plural nouns and articles (a, an, the).
  • Pay attention to studying this point of English grammar.
  • TOPIC : Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums.
  • others argue that they should spend more money on medical care and education.
  • Discuss both views and give your opinion It is true that a highly debatable issue (missing word) whether the government should not allocate resources for building theatres and sports stadium , while some people suppose that providing healthy (wrong word) care and education must be (missing word) priority of government.
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You still make a lot of mistakes with singular/plural nouns and articles (a, an, the). Pay attention to studying this point of English grammar.



TOPIC : Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. others argue that they should spend more money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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