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Topic: In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

Answer:

These days schools can’t maintain proper discipline as they could before. This is due to student bad manners. Student of this generation are uncontrollable, they do whatever they desire, and they act like immature.

Even though these are all student faults, I don’t think they should be directly blamed for this behavior. The rules and norm that we have accepted for our current generation has turned our kids into these. Nowadays parent go to their office, leaving back his child alone at home. As a result, parents can’t give his child proper guidance and his child gets spoiled. Apart from this, TV and computer games are making students violent. TV shows such as wrestling and variety computer games motivates the students to imitate what they have observe. Although, this shows alert us with warning, but most of the kids are not mature enough to follow this message.

However, all these problems could be solved if we could bring little change in our life. If parents could leave their child to a guardian when both are going out. Parents should talk to son/daughter about what activities the child has done. They should also discuss with them what’s right or wrong. If parents could spend their time with the kids and follow the right step only then we can bring change to pupil life.

On top of this, we should pray to God and ask for proper guidance. Government should also monitor activities done by students outside school. Only then we would be able to change students behavior of all nation.