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Question: In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed their education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

My essay:

In the majority of countries, living with their parents is more and more popular in adults even after they graduated and found jobs. Although this trend has some drawbacks, I would argue that there are more merits.

On the one hand, there are a few disadvantages of living with their parents. Firstly, adults can rely on parents for basic daily tasks, for instance: cooking, cleaning, or doing the laundry. When they live with their parents, they will think they need not do anything in the house, they take the parent's support for granted. Another problem is the money issue, youngsters are depending on their parents and may be lost the ability to manage their own budgets.

However, I strongly believe that living with their parents offers more benefits. First of all, they can be taken care of by fathers and mothers. To illustrate, when adults come back home after work, they do not worry about cooking meals because the mothers always caring and help them decrease the pressure on their life. Adults need not live lonely, the burden in their work and life can be shared with them such as financial burdens since the parents support their finance. Furthermore, they always love their children and hope they develop in the future

In conclusion, I would believe that the merits of living with parents in adults outweigh by disadvantages