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We need the participation of all people in the world, especially young people because they have a significant role in every region. Young people are the future of the world and the fundamental force in enhancing social-economic development. Youth allows them to perform the most difficult missions. Youth allows them to go to any place on earth so that they can observe, learn and apply the advance in all fields of countries all over the world. Only they can have enough resources to carry out big, innovative, ambitious ideas in order to develop their regions. Furthermore, young people also contribute greatly to strengthening regional cooperation. They are always willing to participate in international volunteer activities, youth exchange programs and many of them are studying abroad. Through those activities, programs and courses they make friends, learn about other cultures, and gradually understand each other. That is the foundation of solidarity and cooperation.
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I suggest breaking into three paragraphs and inserting two semi-colons to reduce the use of ‘and’. We need the participation of all people in the world, especially young people ; because they have a significant role in every region. Young people are the future of the world and the fundamental force in enhancing social-economic development.
- I suggest breaking into three paragraphs and inserting two semi-colons to reduce the use of ‘and’.
- We need the participation of all people in the world, especially young people ; because they have a significant role in every region.
- Young people are the future of the world and the fundamental force in enhancing social-economic development.
- Youth allows them to perform the most difficult missions.
- Youth allows them to go to any place on earth ; so that they can observe, learn and apply the advance in all fields of countries all over the world.
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I suggest breaking into three paragraphs and inserting two semi-colons to reduce the use of ‘and’.
We need the participation of all people in the world, especially young people; because they have a significant role in every region. Young people are the future of the world and the fundamental force in enhancing social-economic development. Youth allows them to perform the mo
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