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0 It would be very nice, if someone could check and correct my letter of motivation quickly. 02br
00Because it is very urgent. 02br
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00Dear Madam / Sir, 02br
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00My name is .... and I am living in Cologne, Germany. I have 02br
00almost completed my undergraduate studies in Economics at University of 02br
00Cologne and know I would like to apply for an internship abroad. 02br
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00The main reason for my application is that I truly believe working 02br
00abroad would be a great way to broaden my horizon and to enrich my work 02br
00experience. In the last few years, with the increasing importance of the 02br
00relationship between the European countries and on the other hand the 02br
00worldwide globalization, it has become very important to be connected to 02br
00the International market and to be able to interact with different 02br
00cultures. 02br
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00It has always been a great wish of mine to get some working experience 02br
00in another country, especially in the USA as I think that working in 02br
00different organizations and especially companies abroad is very important 02br
00for my professional and personal career. 02br
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00I search for an innovating and stimulating environment and it is 02br
00precisely your dynamic image that attracts me. At my age you like things 02br
00moving and, as a young intern, I would like to make my first steps in a 02br
00resourceful surrounding such as your organization. 02br
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00I have already gained some practical experience in companies in Germany 02br
00and the Netherlands. From my experiences in the past I have learned the 02br
00values of teamwork and the importance of your personal engagement you 02br
00put into every task. I have learned to concentrate on fixed goals and to 02br
00deal with time to meet deadlines. 02br
00I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to get to know a different 02br
00working culture and furthermore to improve my written and spoken English 02br
00skills in such a great country as the USA. 02br
00Thank you very much for considering my request. 02br
00Attached you will find my detailed C.V. with all the information on my 02br
00studies and my career history. If you have any further questions, 02br
00please contact me via e-mail 02br
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00Yours sincerely, 0-