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Writing task 1

The given chart compares global telephone sales of five different brands from 2009 to 2013. Overall, it is clearly that people had a tendency to use mobile phones that were produced from Samsung. Anh this is opposed to ZTE, the least favourite brand over the course of 4 years.

On the one hand, Samsung and Nokia ranked the first and the second chart for having the biggest number of mobile phones sold. Samsung increased this figure through 4 years, from over 200 in 2009 to 450 mobile phones sold in 2013. However, Nokia witnessed a downward trend, showing the decline from almost 450 mobile phones in 2009 to only a half of the revenue of the beginning of the period in 2013.

On the other hand, the three remaining brands sold out only under 150 phones. Brand Apple increased the record over 4 years, with the figure tripled up to the number of 150. In the opposite, LG slightly dropped their sales of mobile phones by 50 sales in 4 years. Although ZTE ranked the bottom with the modest figure, this brand still rose only around 50 sales from 2009 to 2013.

Writing task 2: Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Dicuss both views and give your own opinion.

Change in lifestyle is divided into two discussions. People deem that curbing change is a good way to live, while others believe change is indispensible in our life. I personally think that change can make things get better.

It is true that some people feel peaceful when they do their everyday routine without any changes. The main reason why such behaviour is gained traction is they believe that change can bring some negative effects to their lives. For example, a person moves from a countryside to a bustling city, since then, he/she usually has a headache and can't get a deep sleep at night given the noisy of a city. Moreover, our physical and spiritual bodies are considered to be fear of changing our lives. Fear that something bad can happen, or the way of change makes us lose ourselves deter us from changing and eventually, we go back to our daily routine to feel safe and sound.

However, chane can render people's lives have better things if they make the right decision of change. Change can give us more perspectives about every subjects in life, thus giving us new information and ideas. Getting your comfort zone sometimes gives us more energies to step forward and do more things in order to fulfill your life and not regret anything. Just like Rapunzel in Disney movies, when she got out of the castle, she saw the world in a different way, a colorful and interesting way than what she was told by her mother. And this change motivate her desire to live a fulfilling life.

On a whole, you can choose whether do things to be in stable or change to make life happier. But from my point of view, change is not bad and everyone should try to change so that they can find the best version of themselves.