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Ziawj2 Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Please check a letter of resignation
Please chech the letter to make it more unity, coherent, and natural.
Dear Mr. Wang,
I really regret to tell you that I will resign from your editorial office on January 18, 2012.
I very appreciate the care and support that you have given to me during the two months that I have worked here. And I also appreciate the valuable opportunities that you have offered to me.
However, I find that the job is not what I expected in the past two months. As you know, it mainly deals with inanimate stuff, i.e. words, photos and graphs while I prefer working with animate life, i.e. people, communicating with them, because of my outgoing personality. In addition, I feel that it is rather hard for me to sit still in a place the whole day. Therefore, I do not think the current job is fit for me.
I will, of course, handle over the outstanding work and responsibilities before I am leaving. Finally, I am very sorry for the inconvenience that I have caused.
Yours sincerely,
Liu He
Dear Mr. Wang,
I really regret to tell you that I will resign from your editorial office on January 18, 2012.
I very appreciate the care and support that you have given to me during the two months that I have worked here. And I also appreciate the valuable opportunities that you have offered to me.
However, I find that the job is not what I expected in the past two months. As you know, it mainly deals with inanimate stuff, i.e. words, photos and graphs while I prefer working with animate life, i.e. people, communicating with them, because of my outgoing personality. In addition, I feel that it is rather hard for me to sit still in a place the whole day. Therefore, I do not think the current job is fit for me.
I will, of course, handle over the outstanding work and responsibilities before I am leaving. Finally, I am very sorry for the inconvenience that I have caused.
Yours sincerely,
Liu He
Top answer
Liu He, You may want to reconsider including the part about not liking to sit for long periods of time. Stating that much detail is almost never necessary, nor is it recommended in most cases. I have added/changed a few words.
- Liu He, You may want to reconsider including the part about not liking to sit for long periods of time.
- Stating that much detail is almost never necessary, nor is it recommended in most cases.
- I have added/changed a few words.
- Use or discard at your discretion.
- Dear Mr.
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Liu He,
You may want to reconsider including the part about not liking to sit for long periods of time. Stating that much detail is almost never necessary, nor is it recommended in most cases. I have added/changed a few words. Use or discard at your discretion.
Dear Mr. ****,
I really regret to tell you that I will resign from your editorial office on January 18, 2012.
You may want to reconsider including the part about not liking to sit for long periods of time. Stating that much detail is almost never necessary, nor is it recommended in most cases. I have added/changed a few words. Use or discard at your discretion.
Dear Mr. ****,
I really regret to tell you that I will resign from your editorial office on January 18, 2012.
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