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AukI Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Please check 2 sentence's grammatical mistakes

Is there anything wrong with those 2 sentences?

  1. I love food, at the first of advising at my college, I was pretty bored with the orientation and visited the cafeteria for the first time in my life and I was very much amused by the first look of it.
  1. The name ‘Coke-Shop’ catches into my head and so I go there the first time and got 2 pieces of fries and pepsi.
  

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Hi, Is there anything wrong with those 2 sentences? I love food, at the first of advising at my college, I was pretty bored with the orientation and visited the cafeteria for the first time in my life and I was very much amused by the first look of it. Not correct.

  • Hi, Is there anything wrong with those 2 sentences?
  • I love food, at the first of advising at my college, I was pretty bored with the orientation and visited the cafeteria for the first time in my life and I was very much amused by the first look of it.
  • Not correct.
  • My guess is that you mean this.
  • I love food.
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Hi,

Is there anything wrong with those 2 sentences?

  1. I love food, at the first of advising at my college, I was pretty bored with the orientation and visited the cafeteria for the first time in my life and I was very much amused by the first look of it.
  2. Not correct. My guess is that you mean this.
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thank you very much for your help.

Someone corrected me that I should use :

I love food. On the first orientation session at my college, I was pretty bored, and visited the cafeteria for the first time in my life. I was very much amused by my first look at it.

Is it wrong to use 'at' the first time...?
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Hi,

Someone corrected me that I should use :

I love food. On the first orientation session at my college, I was pretty bored, and visited the cafeteria for the first time in my life. I was very much amused by my first look at it.

Is it wrong to use 'at' the first time...?

I wouldn't
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past few weeks i feel very sad. I miss my My father and mother, more one one month i nevr call them. really say sorry to my father and mother.
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Hi,

past few weeks i feel very sad. I miss my My father and mother, more one one month i nevr call them. really say sorry to my father and mother.

For the past few weeks I have felt very sad. I miss my father and mother. For more than a month I have not called them. I really want to say sorry to them.

Cliv

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