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EverestCTS Posted 4 years ago
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When I was a kid, I would visit my grandma but I would never visit my uncle. My grandma would give me money every time I visited her. My uncle on the other hand was go greedy so I never liked visiting my uncle.

Any there any correction needed?

  

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EverestCTS Any there any correction needed? If I were your copyeditor, I would suggest the following: "When I was a kid, I would visit my grandma, but I would never visit my uncle. My grandma would give me money every time I visited her.

  • EverestCTS Any there any correction needed?
  • If I were your copyeditor, I would suggest the following: "When I was a kid, I would visit my grandma, but I would never visit my uncle.
  • My grandma would give me money every time I visited her.
  • "
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EverestCTSAny there any correction needed?

If I were your copyeditor, I would suggest the following:

"When I was a kid, I would visit my grandma, but I would never visit my uncle. My grandma would give me money every time I visited her. My uncle, on the other hand, was stingy, so I never liked visiting him."

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