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Creativeguru Posted 10 years ago
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We owe our achievements to all our stakeholders – investors, employees, vendors and clients. Because without their support , we would not have achieved these many share of honor within last two years.

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"Because" makes your second sentence a fragment. It is not needed, so delete it. Also the phrase "these many share of honor" is not grammatical or clear.

— Doctor D

  • "Because" makes your second sentence a fragment.
  • It is not needed, so delete it.
  • Also the phrase "these many share of honor" is not grammatical or clear.
  • So: We owe our achievements to all our stakeholders – investors, employees, vendors and clients.
  • Without their support, we would not have won so many honors [Or: achieved so much ] over the last two years.
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"Because" makes your second sentence a fragment. It is not needed, so delete it. Also the phrase "these many share of honor" is not grammatical or clear. So:

We owe our achievements to all our stakeholders – investors, employees, vendors and clients. Without their support, we would not have won so many honors [Or: achieved so much] over the last two
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