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Zohal Posted 12 years ago
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The clock continued to chime as the stranger crept into the abandoned house. The sinister house was glaring into the essence of the lonely mans core. The man shivered as he felt a presence that concerned him. The occurrence of the feeling made the man, draw closer to the exit. The man was alongside the miserable door staring the crocked house right in-between the eyes, for the reason that he knew it was staring right back .the man turned around reaching out for the rickety handle but to his surprise he reached out hitting the wall, the door had vanished the house was holding him captured . he tried to escape but his chances had all run out. He turned around and realised its here its time... and the suspense is back.
The clock continued to chime as the stranger crept into the abandoned house. The sinister house was glaring into the essence of the lonely man’s core. The man shivered as he felt a presence that concerned him. The occurrence of the feeling made the man, draw closer to the exit. The man was alongside the miserable door, staring the crocked house right in-between the eyes, for the reason that he knew it was staring right back .the man turned around reaching out for the rickety handle but to his surprise he reached out hitting the wall, the door had vanished the house was holding him captured ! He tried to escape but his chances had all run out. He turned around and realised it’s here its time... and the suspense is back.
The clock continued to chime as the stranger crept into the abandoned house. The sinister house was glaring into the essence of the lonely mans core. The man shivered as he felt a presence that concerned him. The occurrence of the feeling made the man, draw closer to the exit. The man was alongside the miserable door staring the crocked house right in-between the eyes, for the reason that he knew it was staring right back .the man turned around reaching out for the rickety handle but to his surprise he reached out hitting the wall, the door had vanished the house was holding him captured . he tried to escape but his chances had all run out. He turned around and realised its here its time... and the suspense is back.
The clock continued to chime as the stranger crept into the abandoned house. The sinister house was glaring into the essence of the lonely man’s core. The man shivered as he felt a presence that concerned him. The occurrence of the feeling made the man, draw closer to the exit. The man was alongside the miserable door, staring the crocked house right in-between the eyes, for the reason that he knew it was staring right back .the man turned around reaching out for the rickety handle but to his surprise he reached out hitting the wall, the door had vanished the house was holding him captured ! He tried to escape but his chances had all run out. He turned around and realised it’s here its time... and the suspense is back.
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It is poorly written or transcribed, so it is difficult to punctuate confidently. The clock continued to chime as the stranger crept into the abandoned house. The sinister house was glaring into the essence of the lonely man’s core.
- It is poorly written or transcribed, so it is difficult to punctuate confidently.
- The clock continued to chime as the stranger crept into the abandoned house.
- The sinister house was glaring into the essence of the lonely man’s core.
- The man shivered as he felt a presenc e: that concerned him.
- The occurrence of the feeling made the m an dra w closer to the exit.
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It is poorly written or transcribed, so it is difficult to punctuate confidently.
The clock continued to chime as the stranger crept into the abandoned house. The sinister house was glaring into the essence of the lonely man’s core. The man shivered as he felt a presence: that concerned him. The occurrence of the feeling made the man draw closer to the exit. The man was a
The clock continued to chime as the stranger crept into the abandoned house. The sinister house was glaring into the essence of the lonely man’s core. The man shivered as he felt a presence: that concerned him. The occurrence of the feeling made the man draw closer to the exit. The man was a
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Sir, I tried my best. But i think all vain as i am also not confident about it .Can u write a suspense story for me as mentioned below
Write the opening chapter to a story. You should include an element of suspense to engage the reader. Use exclamation marks when necessary. Your story could begin with the words:
The clock continued to chime as the stranger crept into the
Write the opening chapter to a story. You should include an element of suspense to engage the reader. Use exclamation marks when necessary. Your story could begin with the words:
The clock continued to chime as the stranger crept into the
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zohalCan u write a suspense story for me as mentioned belowNo, of course not! That is cheating. You have done well so far.
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