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Avidlearner Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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Hello teachers,

Please check below given article.

We all need food. We take different kinds of food and every food item is made of different ingredients. There are many ingredients which are common in different food items.

Plants and animals are the main sources of food. Plants provide grains, cereals, vegetables and fruits and animals provide milk, eggs and meat products.
Green plants can prepare their own food. They prepare more food then they need and store extra food in different parts of themselves. For example leaves, roots, fruits, seeds, stems etc. we use these parts for food like fruits, roots, leaf and stem of different plants for food. We use more than one part of plants also.

Honey is a special food item which is made by honeybees. Honeybees collect nectar from flower and convert it into honey and store it into their hive. Flowers and their nectar are available only for a part of the year. Therefore, bees store this nectar for their use all through the year. We collect the food stored by the bees as honey.

All animals can be classified according to their food habits as herbivorous, carnivorous and omnivorous.
Animals which eat plants or plants products as food are called Herbivorous. Animals which eat other animals are called Carnivorous. Animals which eat both plants and animals are called Omnivorous.
  

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Please tell us the specific topic or question that you are writing about.
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Hi clive,

Thanks for your reply. My main concern is punctuation errors.
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The punctuation is OK, except for a few unnecessary capitals at the end.

I thought you might be interested in advice on how to structure your essay better.
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Hi again,

I am a content writer. I always worry about punctuation errors. Surely I would like to get suggestions on structure of a good essay.

Thanks a lot! .
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The first thing to look for in an essay is whether the writer has addressed the topic.
An essay can be in wonderful English but completely off-topic.

That's why I asked you about your specific topic. What is it, exactly?

Clive

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