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Miyabi Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

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I've airmailed a parcel to my friend and this is the note. Please help to correct:

"If you still haven't received it by the end of this week, I think there should be some problems on delivering. Please let me know in case this happened."

Thank you!
  

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If you still haven't received it by the end of this week, I think there might should be some problems in the mail system. on delivering. )

— AlpheccaStars

  • If you still haven't received it by the end of this week, I think there might should be some problems in the mail system.
  • on delivering.
  • )
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If you still haven't received it by the end of this week, I think there might should be some problems in the mail system. on delivering. Please let me know if in case this happens." ("In case" is OK, but my preference is "if".)
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Thank you so much for the corrections. It helps a lot! Thanks, AlpheccaStars!
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