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Jajar Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

please cheak my grammar.new work

0The affect from the ambiguous political made many businesses import cheap products from China and put the made in Thailand on it, from that point the Staedtler company thinks that if it still be like this the company may get the effect soon.02br
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00The company will cooperate with The Asean-China free trade pact has triggered price wars in Thailand as cheap stationery products from China have hit the local market.02br
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00Beside that we hope the circulation will be higher we will invest to the activities with TV producers to create the showed for kids which that is the main point and we will increase the number of market by expert the product.02br
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0Hi,02br 02br 00There are a lot of problems here. The main difficulty is that you are writing sentences that are too long. 02br 02br 00I suggest that you rewrite this in shorter sentences, and then repost it for further comments.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00There are a lot of problems here.
  • The main difficulty is that you are writing sentences that are too long.
  • 02br 02br 00I suggest that you rewrite this in shorter sentences, and then repost it for further comments.
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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00There are a lot of problems here. The main difficulty is that you are writing sentences that are too long. This causes you to make more grammar errors, and aslso makes it hard to understand your meaning.02br
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00I suggest that you rewrite this in shorter sentences, and then repost it for further comments. OK?02br
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