please cheack my grammar again.

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0Nowadays, technology plays an important role to consumer.   Product should be modern and convenient for consumer because the consumer pays more attention to the most convenient products.02br00On the contrary, production of modern products neglect the affects to the environment. The company gives more attention to this matter, not only just making profit.  The company has the policy of responsibility to the social and make products that are friendly to environment or green product.  Moreover, the company has a strategy of making good quality products that help to reduce pollution or pollution-free products to satisfy the consumers who want to save our environment.0-

Jenne · Accepted Answer

0Nowadays, technology plays an important role to 01font00the02font00 consumer. Product01font00s02font00 should be modern and convenient for consumer01font00s/the consumer 02font00because the consumer pays more attention to the most convenient products.02br
00On the contrary, production of modern products neglect01font00s02font00 the 01del~~00a02del~~01font00e02font00ffects to01font00/it has on02font00 the environment. The company gives more attention to this matter, not only just making profit. The company has the policy of responsibility 01del~~00to02del~~00 01font00for02font00 the 01del~~00social02del~~00 01font00society02font00 and make01font00s02font00 products that are friendly to 01font00the02font00 environment or green product01font00s02font00. Moreover, the company has a strategy of making good quality products that help 01del~~00to02del~~00 reduce pollution or pollution-free products to satisfy the consumers who want to save our environment.02br
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00You made some mistakes with plural forms and he/she/it verbs. Also some spelling mistakes, but it wasn't too bad 05000.02br
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00I don't think I've corrected all the mistakes, because I'm more excited about French at the moment... But someone else will be able to correct me.010id1

Non_nativespeaker · Answer

0I am not an expert, but i think i would be able to give some help here.02br
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00Anybody is free to give comments because I might be introducing some mistakes here. Thank you.02br
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00Nowadays, technology plays an important role to 01font00the 02font00consumer01font00s02font00. Product01font00s02font00 should be modern and convenient for consumer01font00s 02font00because consumer01font00s02font00 pay more attention to the most convenient products.02br
01font00Manufacturing02font00 of 01font00some 02font00modern products neglect the 01font00e02font00ffects 01font00it has on02font00 the environment. 01font00To answer that, the 02font00Company gives more attention to this matter, 01font00tha02font01font00n concentrating all their 02font01font00efforts just 02font01font00to02font00 mak01font00e02font00 profit. The company even has a policy 01font00to be02font00 responsibility 01font00for02font00 the 01font00society02font00 and make products that 01font00would help02font00 01font00the02font00 environment or "green product01font00s"02font00. Moreover, the company 01font00also 02font00has a strategy of making good quality products that help reduce pollution 01font00and also produces02font00 pollution-free products to satisfy consumers who 01font00are concious about the02font00 environment.0-

please cheack my grammar again.

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