0
Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please can you correct this paragraph, and if you can find me a better word instead of occasion, thank you
Taking photos for my baby
Don't let any minute of your baby's life pass without recording it, photos and videos. Because those stunning phase of his/her life are the best, and they never coming back. So saving them will now and then remind you of the best child ever, that is yours. And they'll also be as a happy occasion making you (as a parent) blessed every time when you look at them.
this one too was a happy minutes, every photo reminds us of what he was doing then.like here when he clubbed for the first time, here what he touched the first time, and here where he pointed, look this when he smiled, and here when crawled
, and don't forget when he cried for his toys, also don't miss when he spat up/out food because he doesn't want to eat! That was naughty! And oh how happy he was there, every photo has a special value.
Don't let any minute of your baby's life pass without recording it, photos and videos. Because those stunning phase of his/her life are the best, and they never coming back. So saving them will now and then remind you of the best child ever, that is yours. And they'll also be as a happy occasion making you (as a parent) blessed every time when you look at them.
this one too was a happy minutes, every photo reminds us of what he was doing then.like here when he clubbed for the first time, here what he touched the first time, and here where he pointed, look this when he smiled, and here when crawled
, and don't forget when he cried for his toys, also don't miss when he spat up/out food because he doesn't want to eat! That was naughty! And oh how happy he was there, every photo has a special value.Top answer
Taking Photos of my Baby Don't let any minute of your baby's life pass without recording it in photos and videos, because those stunning phases of his or her life are the best, and they are never coming back. Saving them will now and then remind you of the best child ever—yours—and they'll also make for a happy occasion, blessing you as a parent every time you look at them. This one too was a happy minute: every photo reminds us of what he was doing then, like here when he clubbed for the first time, here what he touched for the first time, and here where he pointed.
- Taking Photos of my Baby Don't let any minute of your baby's life pass without recording it in photos and videos, because those stunning phases of his or her life are the best, and they are never coming back.
- Saving them will now and then remind you of the best child ever—yours—and they'll also make for a happy occasion, blessing you as a parent every time you look at them.
- This one too was a happy minute: every photo reminds us of what he was doing then, like here when he clubbed for the first time, here what he touched for the first time, and here where he pointed.
- Look at this, when he smiled, and here when he crawled—and don't forget when he cried for his toys.
- Also, don't miss when he spat out food because he didn't want to eat.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
1 Answers
0
Taking Photos of my Baby
Don't let any minute of your baby's life pass without recording it in photos and videos, because those stunning phases of his or her life are the best, and they are never coming back. Saving them will now and then remind you of the best child ever—yours—and they'll also make for a happy occasion, blessing you as a parent every time you look at them.
Don't let any minute of your baby's life pass without recording it in photos and videos, because those stunning phases of his or her life are the best, and they are never coming back. Saving them will now and then remind you of the best child ever—yours—and they'll also make for a happy occasion, blessing you as a parent every time you look at them.
0
Related Questions