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Mishaelmoodley Posted 15 years ago
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Once upon a Time, a fairy named tomas decieded to go for a walk in the forest to vist a group of elf and dwarf for a party to celebrate the new year . Along his way, tomas came upon several rabb and fox. Being that tomas was a good Fairy, he asked the rabbits and foxes to come along and join the fun . However the rabbits and foxes did not enjoy traveling with fairy, nor did they enjoy the funn, so they gracefully declined the invitation that tomas extended . So a very Sad, yet understanding tomas continued upon his short journey to vist the Dwarfs and elf.
  

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mishaelmoodley Once upon a t ime, a fairy named T omas decieded to go for a walk in the forest to vist a group of elf and dwarf , for a New Year party celebration . Along his way, T omas came upon several rabb its and fox es . Being that Since T omas was a good Fairy, he asked the rabbits and foxes to come along and join the fun .

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  • mishaelmoodley Once upon a t ime, a fairy named T omas decieded to go for a walk in the forest to vist a group of elf and dwarf , for a New Year party celebration .
  • Along his way, T omas came upon several rabb its and fox es .
  • Being that Since T omas was a good Fairy, he asked the rabbits and foxes to come along and join the fun .
  • However , the rabbits and foxes did not enjoy traveling with the fairy, nor did they enjoy the fun n , so they gracefully declined the invitation that T omas extended .
  • So a very s ad, yet understanding Sadly, tomas continued upon his short journey to vist the Dwarfs and elf.
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mishaelmoodleyOnce upon a time, a fairy named Tomas decieded to go for a walk in the forest to vist a group of elf and dwarf, for a New Year party celebration. Along his way, Tomas came upon several rabbits and foxes. Being that Since Tomas was a good Fairy, he ask
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You posted the same question twice. Please review my reply. The same mistakes are still not corrected.
i.e. Named Tomas, fairy, One upon a time,
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