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children must take more and more important decisions soon. there are sometimes assisted by their parents. Sometimes the choice is personal. Sometimes the choice is imposed by parents. Sometimes the choice is influenced. We live in a society where the duty of parents in guiding their children. parents intefere Does the decision of the child?
First, it seems that decisions are personal. For example ten
eight years, we have the right to vote in France. Our choice is personal and canbe different from our parents. The same applies to professional careers.
The choice of becoming a doctor, lawyer or plumber is a personal choice.
In addition, a child does not want one thing: to become autonomous and responsible. It is misleading as it learns.
But on the other hand, parents want the best for their children. So they encourage them to study and have money. Similarly, he wants
be there for important decisions. Parents think (I said: think)
they know everything, they all lived just because they are 30 years older thanus. But they must realize that life is not the same as 30 years ago.
Therefore, I think parents do not interfere in the decisions of
children, worse, they take the decision for them.