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XxNADJAxx Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please. Can you correct my essay? :)
0 Hi everyone! I have been visiting and reading this forum for a long time but this is the first time I write something down in this forum. I was wondering if anybody can help me and correct my essay. I'll be very grateful. 05 0 02 br
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01 i 00 Some people think that companies should offer to their workers steady jobs. Others think that long contracts may lead to uncompetitive employees. In this essay I will look at some of the arguments for and against steady jobs. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 Employers have several arguments against the need for steady jobs. They claim that offering long contracts produce a lower competitiveness among the workers for they don’t feel having their bosses on their toes. Another point is that offering long contracts allow the company to have always a young staff. This fact can be important for companies such as pubs or fast-food restaurants which prefer young people to wait on. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 However, I feel that having a steady job is something positive for companies as well as workers. With long contracts, workers can work without stressing out about looking for a job within months. In addition, the more they work in the same company the more they enhance their particular skills required for their position. I mean, some companies need skilled workers for particular positions and there isn’t a better way to get the required skills than to work in that position. This way companies are sure to have efficient workers in their staff. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 In conclusion, although businesses don’t usually hire people for long time, it is a fact that people with steady jobs work much better than people with short contracts. 02 i 010id 1
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01 i 00 Some people think that companies should offer to their workers steady jobs. Others think that long contracts may lead to uncompetitive employees. In this essay I will look at some of the arguments for and against steady jobs. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 Employers have several arguments against the need for steady jobs. They claim that offering long contracts produce a lower competitiveness among the workers for they don’t feel having their bosses on their toes. Another point is that offering long contracts allow the company to have always a young staff. This fact can be important for companies such as pubs or fast-food restaurants which prefer young people to wait on. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 However, I feel that having a steady job is something positive for companies as well as workers. With long contracts, workers can work without stressing out about looking for a job within months. In addition, the more they work in the same company the more they enhance their particular skills required for their position. I mean, some companies need skilled workers for particular positions and there isn’t a better way to get the required skills than to work in that position. This way companies are sure to have efficient workers in their staff. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 In conclusion, although businesses don’t usually hire people for long time, it is a fact that people with steady jobs work much better than people with short contracts. 02 i 010id 1
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0 Hi there, 02 br 02 br 00 there are a few points which I have corrected, as below - Nick: 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Employers have[ 01 b 00 make 02 b 00 is better] several arguments against the need for steady jobs. They claim that offering long contracts 01 b 00 produces 02 b 00 a lower competitiveness among the workers 01 b 00 as 02 b 00 they don’t feel 01 b 00 they have 02 b 00 their bosses on their 01 b 00 backs 02 b 00 . 02 b 00 the company 01 b 00 employing only 02 b 00 young staff.
- 0 Hi there, 02 br 02 br 00 there are a few points which I have corrected, as below - Nick: 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Employers have[ 01 b 00 make 02 b 00 is better] several arguments against the need for steady jobs.
- They claim that offering long contracts 01 b 00 produces 02 b 00 a lower competitiveness among the workers 01 b 00 as 02 b 00 they don’t feel 01 b 00 they have 02 b 00 their bosses on their 01 b 00 backs 02 b 00 .
- 02 b 00 the company 01 b 00 employing only 02 b 00 young staff.
- 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 However, I feel that having a steady job is something positive for companies as well as workers.
- With long contracts, workers can work without 01 b 00 becoming stressed 02 b 00 about looking for a 01 b 00 new 02 b 00 job within months.
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0 Hi there, 02 br
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00 there are a few points which I have corrected, as below - Nick: 02 br
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01 i 00 Employers have[ 01 b 00 make 02 b 00 is better] several arguments against the need for steady jobs. They claim that offering long contracts 01 b 00 produces 02 b 00 a lower competitiveness among the workers 01 b
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00 there are a few points which I have corrected, as below - Nick: 02 br
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01 i 00 Employers have[ 01 b 00 make 02 b 00 is better] several arguments against the need for steady jobs. They claim that offering long contracts 01 b 00 produces 02 b 00 a lower competitiveness among the workers 01 b
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0 Hi Nick147!! Thank you very much for reviewing my essay 05 0 00 . I only have a doubt. Everything that you have corrected was wrong in my essay? or have you substituted some words by other words more appropiated in that context?? 02 br
00 I'm going to note down my mistakes in the esssay. 02 br
00 I am on the point of finishing my second essay. 02 br
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00 I'm going to note down my mistakes in the esssay. 02 br
00 I am on the point of finishing my second essay. 02 br
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0 Hello again, 02 br
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00 I tried to keep as much of your own text as possible in the essay. The corrections do cover errors, some are just grammatical points, where you will see I have substituted a different form of a word, eg 01 b 00 produces 02 b 00 for 01 b 00 produce 02 b 00 . There are some words I used that are more appropriate, like “t
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00 I tried to keep as much of your own text as possible in the essay. The corrections do cover errors, some are just grammatical points, where you will see I have substituted a different form of a word, eg 01 b 00 produces 02 b 00 for 01 b 00 produce 02 b 00 . There are some words I used that are more appropriate, like “t
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0 Hi Nick, it has been very helpful your review. I really appreciate your help 05 0 02 br
00 Within some minutes I'll send my second essay. I hope it has got less errors than the first one. 02 br
00 Thankssssss 02 br
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00 Within some minutes I'll send my second essay. I hope it has got less errors than the first one. 02 br
00 Thankssssss 02 br
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