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Iererimo Mwea Posted 12 years ago
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To:
Managing Director, Butaritari Shipping.

Cc: Chairman Butaritari shipping.

Re: Application for annual leave from 20th of October to 3rd of November 2014.

Mauri,

I am writing this letter to request you to permit me annual leave for 2 weeks as mention above.
The purpose for my leave is that I will rebuild my house before my wife uncle return to his house. The date I mention above is the time of my loan to be out from Kiribati Housing Corporation LTD, and in that time I will start to rebuild my house.
Please find someone to hand over my pending works to him, before I take my leave.
So I am kindly requesting you to please approve this leave application.
I hope to receive your positive response. Thank you for consideration.

Yours Sincerely,

…………………………. Iererimo
  

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This is how I would present this memo: To: Managing Director, Butaritari Shipping Re: Application for Annual Leave Dear Mauri, I am writing to request my annual leave for the tweek period of 20 October to 3 November. The purpose for my leave is so that I can rebuild my house before my wife's uncle returns to his house. The date I mentioned above is the time my loan will be available from Kiribati Housing Corporation LTD, so during that time I would like to start to rebuild my house.

  • This is how I would present this memo: To: Managing Director, Butaritari Shipping Re: Application for Annual Leave Dear Mauri, I am writing to request my annual leave for the tweek period of 20 October to 3 November.
  • The purpose for my leave is so that I can rebuild my house before my wife's uncle returns to his house.
  • The date I mentioned above is the time my loan will be available from Kiribati Housing Corporation LTD, so during that time I would like to start to rebuild my house.
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  • I hope to shortly receive your approval for my leave application.
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This is how I would present this memo:

To: Managing Director, Butaritari Shipping

Re: Application for Annual Leave

Dear Mauri,

I am writing to request my annual leave for the tweek period of 20 October to 3 November.

The purpose for my leave is so that I can rebuild my house before my wife's uncle returns to his house. The date I mentioned above

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