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PeterTom Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please can you check my grammer :)

Hello,

I am new to this site Emotion: smile

I am trying to improve my english grammer and hopefully you can help me Emotion: smile

Story:
I think it is good thing we got Aamir in british boxing that helped Hatton to have bigger name. When Aamir won a siver medal, british boxing become more exciting and growing. Many kids (mostly British Asian) idol Aamir so much and joined boxing training.


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I think it is a good thing that we have Aamir in British boxing: it has helped Hatton acquire a bigger name. When Aamir won a silver medal, British boxing become more exciting and started to grow in popularity. Many young people (mostly British-Asians) idolize Aamir, and have begun boxing training.

— Mister Micawber

  • I think it is a good thing that we have Aamir in British boxing: it has helped Hatton acquire a bigger name.
  • When Aamir won a silver medal, British boxing become more exciting and started to grow in popularity.
  • Many young people (mostly British-Asians) idolize Aamir, and have begun boxing training.
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I think it is a good thing that we have Aamir in British boxing: it has helped Hatton acquire a bigger name. When Aamir won a silver medal, British boxing become more exciting and started to grow in popularity. Many young people (mostly British-Asians) idolize Aamir, and have begun boxing training.
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Thanks. My grammer is too bad.

Do you know any site that can help to improve my grammer.
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There are many English grammar sites that offer quizzes and grammar points-- just google that phrase, PeterTom-- or better yet, ask US! Welcome to English Forums.

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