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3. Television is dangerous because it has destroyed the family living and communication. Some people said that it absorb people’s time too much that they have no time to talk to each other. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Television has become an integral part of people's living. Nowadays almost every family has got a TV set especially in the western world. What is more, even children have got their personal TV set in their rooms. Having a TV set had a grave disadvantage namely by watching it you may have a lack of time for your family and friends.
I cannot fully agree that a TV set is guilty in replacing communication between people and can be harmful .
From my standpoint, first of all everything depends on people's nature . No doubt, that since appearance of TV people began communicating less but I am sure that the root reason stems not from TV, but from people's unwillingness to take interest in other people.
Certainly, some people are so engrossed in watching TV without noticing what is going around.
From firsthand experience, I myself felt how TV may influence on relations between people. For example, when I was visiting one developing country where not every family are able to buy a TV set, I had a luck to be a guest in a family whose members have got no TV set and as a result they spend almost every evening together. Only imagine, after dinner all members of family were drinking tea and at the same time they were discussing every day life and current political news. As for my family after dinner we simply turn one our telly and stare at the monitor. I have to admit that we often don't speak with each other much because we are simply busy watching TV.
To sum up, I reckon that television should not be blamed for destruction of family living and communication. Admittedly, television is part of human life.