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BermanIJr Posted 21 years ago
Dear Professor:
There seems to be two distinct types of English styles: Creative and Business/Professional. I have always excelled in creative writing; however, I falter when it comes to writing business-like and professionally. For some reason, I just can’t get to the point. Also, in the creative writing realm, one can often duck-and-dodge the rules of grammar and composition and still tell an interesting story or get their point across. In the business world, such avoidance of grammar and punctuation rules can be detrimental to one’s career. It does seem highly unlikely for one to obtain a career without a firm grasp of the fundamentals of English grammar and composition. This notion is what prompted me to want to take your course. I want to have a career one day, preferably Human Resources Management; however, in order for me to acquire such a career I need to be able to communicate effectively. I am positive that this class will be quite instrumental in making my goals and dreams a reality. Equally important is the fact that you really bring the material to life. Your ability to combine humor into your lectures is a sight rarely seen in today’s educational institutions.
I think my present communication skills are fair. I have a natural ability to make my words sound pretty and poetic by using my ten point words. Trepidation is an example of one of my ten point words. In the past I have found myself using the word as an adjective instead of a noun. My speaking skills, on the other hand, oscillate between very articulate to a babbling mess. I guess that depends on the kind of day I am having or the amount of sleep I had the night before.
Currently, I am not employed; however, I do not foresee this as a permanent issue. Once I graduate with a degree in Human Resources Management in hand, I am positive that my one-in-a-million personality will be that extra incentive employers are always looking for in potential employees. I also have a solid professional background in Front Office Operations and Management that will compliment my degree.
I am not very active; therefore, my activities are limited to watching movies with friends and spending hours in front of the mirror trying to make my hair perfect. Believe me, that last activity is a constant work in progress.
Yours sincerely,
My name
Letter Writing
PLEASE CAN SOMEBODY CORRECT MY GRAMMATICAL ERRORS. LETTER DUE 09/26!!!!
Dear Professor:
There seems to be two distinct types of English styles: Creative and Business/Professional. I have always excelled in creative writing; however, I falter when it comes to writing business-like and professionally. For some reason, I just can’t get to the point. Also, in the creative writing realm, one can often duck-and-dodge the rules of grammar and composition and still tell an interesting story or get their point across. In the business world, such avoidance of grammar and punctuation rules can be detrimental to one’s career. It does seem highly unlikely for one to obtain a career without a firm grasp of the fundamentals of English grammar and composition. This notion is what prompted me to want to take your course. I want to have a career one day, preferably Human Resources Management; however, in order for me to acquire such a career I need to be able to communicate effectively. I am positive that this class will be quite instrumental in making my goals and dreams a reality. Equally important is the fact that you really bring the material to life. Your ability to combine humor into your lectures is a sight rarely seen in today’s educational institutions.
I think my present communication skills are fair. I have a natural ability to make my words sound pretty and poetic by using my ten point words. Trepidation is an example of one of my ten point words. In the past I have found myself using the word as an adjective instead of a noun. My speaking skills, on the other hand, oscillate between very articulate to a babbling mess. I guess that depends on the kind of day I am having or the amount of sleep I had the night before.
Currently, I am not employed; however, I do not foresee this as a permanent issue. Once I graduate with a degree in Human Resources Management in hand, I am positive that my one-in-a-million personality will be that extra incentive employers are always looking for in potential employees. I also have a solid professional background in Front Office Operations and Management that will compliment my degree.
I am not very active; therefore, my activities are limited to watching movies with friends and spending hours in front of the mirror trying to make my hair perfect. Believe me, that last activity is a constant work in progress.
Yours sincerely,
My name
Top answer
It is a very good letter BermanlJr. your ability to combine humor in your lectures is a talent (check this is the word you want to use. However to say 'is a sight rarely seen' I think would be not so good because I expect his humour is not seen but heard) that is rarely experienced in todays eductaional institutions.
- It is a very good letter BermanlJr.
- your ability to combine humor in your lectures is a talent (check this is the word you want to use.
- However to say 'is a sight rarely seen' I think would be not so good because I expect his humour is not seen but heard) that is rarely experienced in todays eductaional institutions.
- Currently, I am not employed; however, I do not foresee this as a permanent issue.
- This sentence could be better, I suggest; Currently I am not employed, however I do not expect this situation to be permanent.
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It is a very good letter BermanlJr.
your ability to combine humor in your lectures is a talent (check this is the word you want to use. However to say 'is a sight rarely seen' I think would be not so good because I expect his humour is not seen but heard) that is rarely experienced in todays eductaional institutions.
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your ability to combine humor in your lectures is a talent (check this is the word you want to use. However to say 'is a sight rarely seen' I think would be not so good because I expect his humour is not seen but heard) that is rarely experienced in todays eductaional institutions.
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