Please can anyone correct my grammatical mistakes

Respected teacher and all my dear classmates. A very good morning to all of you.

To I am going to introduce myself so that you guys can know me better.

This is me Rabina Hamal from Baglung but I am currently staying at Samakhusi, Townplanning since I was 2 years old. I recently gave my +2 exams or I am +2 graduated from Takshashila Academy which in Basundhara.

I love to play games. I was a national cricket player of Kathmandu district. I also played cricket, basketball and netball in interschool competition and won many medal or prizes. I also played Volleyball in Nepal Police Academy. I used to play as a player but nowadays I only play if I get time for fun. I am also fond of listening to songs. My favourite band and singer is One Direction and Zayn Malik. Actually Zayn was also a member of one direction but he left the band two years ago because he wanted to make his own kind of music. Now one Direction has four members they are Harry Styles, Liam Payne, Niall Horan and last but not the least Louis Tomlinson. Recently they are on break to enjoy their time by doing what they want. They have also made their own separate album in this break but they promised us that they are going to come back as a band together.

I desire to be a successful airhostess because I feel this profession is the most suitable job for a women to be independent in her life. I like working with different people because I believe different people gives you different knowledge.

Thak you for listening to me.