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Nana91 Posted 15 years ago
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Please can any one help me

please can any one help me

I wrote a thesis statement about persuasion essay and i need someone make a correction for me

Smoking must not be allowed anymore because of affect your health, spend all the money and affect our environment.



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Smoking should be banned because of health issues, also, it's expensive and has a detrimental effect on the environment.

  • Smoking should be banned because of health issues, also, it's expensive and has a detrimental effect on the environment.
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Smoking should be banned because of health issues, also, it's expensive and has a detrimental effect on the environment.

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