please assist me to write a letter asking for a consideration!

Hi all...i would like to ask your help to give me correction about this letter. I will give a brief explanation first.

So, my professor asked me to write a letter to an english teacher here in our university. He asked me to told this english teacher for giving a special consideration for his two students who never attended his class, but they need to pass the class because now they're already in their last semester (graduating students). Those students, live in another city and also work, so they're very busy and didn't have time to attended classes. Actually I don't like to write this letter, but what can I do...it's my professor order.
So please help me to make a good letter:

Dear Professor........,

Good day!

My name is youleea, and I am currently a graduate student here at , majoring DEF.

I understand that these two students, Mr. A and Mr. B are enrolled in your English class.

On behalf of my Professor, I would like to request that you please give them special consideration because they are graduating students. I know that they have not been attending you classes very often because they have been very busy and also working in their company as well.

Thank you very much for your kind consideration


Sincerely,
youleea