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Simpleibr Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

Please anyone can revise my letter. Thanks!

Dear Sir,


Good day!


I am writing to you in connection with the refund air ticket which I can avail as I am not travelling this vacation.


I would like to request your good office to book for me with my preferred vacation date instead of refunding my ticket now. And kindly please inform me ahead of time before booking an air ticket for me.


Looking forward for a favorable response on this matter.

  

Top answer

Business letters should be short, direct, clear and easily understandable. Such a letter will honor the recipient's valuable time and achieve the result you intend. Yours does not qualify.

  • Business letters should be short, direct, clear and easily understandable.
  • Such a letter will honor the recipient's valuable time and achieve the result you intend.
  • Yours does not qualify.
  • Good day!
  • I would like to cancel my reservation #PL87XD, British Airways 108 from Dubai to London, 07/07/2018, returning 21/07/2018.
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Business letters should be short, direct, clear and easily understandable. Such a letter will honor the recipient's valuable time and achieve the result you intend. Yours does not qualify.


Good day!


I would like to cancel my reservation #PL87XD, British Airways 108 from Dubai to London, 07/07/2018, returning 21/07/2018. Instead of a refund, I would like to resc

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