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In America, people never stay in one place for their lifetime. We move from town to city to suburb, from high school to college in a different state, from one job in on region to a better job somewhere else. We are looking for a good place to raise our children. I live in northeast Philadelphia, which I believe it is not a good neighborhood to raise children due to dirty environment, violence in our neighborhood, bad influence in school.

The dirty environment is due to lack of personality. First of all, the students threw trashes all over the street while they walking by. People pollute air by smoking. Moreover, they also threw cigarette filter and empty cigar boxes all over the street. There many people drink alcohol in our neighborhood. They usually left empty glass bottom on the street. It may hurt some one eventually. People don’t clean their street properly as result of that I see many trash lay on floor. People some time put trash out the street too early and make street smell ready nasty. Then, people in my neighborhood did their lawn clean and forget about those broken grasses. When people walk by they carry it to other places. All in all, no body would like to live in a neighborhood like that.

There much violence takes place in my neighborhood. Many of people live on my street aren’t educated. People curse out and smoke drugs in public, and then they have a fight because of that. People live on my street mostly poor, I see some old man wondering around the street asking people for spare of change. Sometime people don’t have change or they don’t want give to a person like that. Therefore, crime rate increase and people afraid go out alone and less activities going on in our neighborhood. There many people report that some one stole their cell phone appear in street suddenly. People in my in my neighborhood just can’t be trust after all.

Students have bad influence between each other in school. Sadly, I see my teacher having hard time to start a class and students are talking. The teachers in school are mostly good teachers, but they have less control over students. In fact, the students have grown a bad habit in school such as; stay in library play computer game and not go to their regular class. People are hanging out in the hall and not go to class. This will result of many lateness in class. People sneak into the lunchroom have fun with their fellow body. Many of student smoke in school restroom and not go to class. When this thing occurs, student’s grades are decline. I believe that people don’t want there children stay in such a bad school system. For those people that in there now, they will not get adequate education.

In brief, a dirty environment will make our children live in an unsafe neighborhood. Violence will destroy people when there are bad things happen to someone. A good school environment will help student get their adequate education for their future need. When they felt to do so, their future will be a mass. When I have a child I will let them stay in a better neighborhood than this.